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Cuts
Contributed by
upomik
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:29:14 PM in AEST
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I will cut once again
Until I cut away
The parts of my life
That seem to decay
So I can be perfect for "mom the master"
Obviously I'm a failure anyway
She's too busy finding the wrong in me
To hear what I have to say
So I just cut away the wrong
Until I'm perfect like she wants me
I'll slice and slice until I'm gone
Maybe then she'll finally see
Copyright ©
upomik
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2004-11-29 22:29:14]
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Re: Cuts
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:22:38 AM AEST
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Yeh maybe she will, but in the end you both, lose, she loses a child and you lose you.
Cool write. |
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Re: Cuts
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:51:07 AM AEST
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| This is so sad, yet it is a great write. Please don't anything you might regret. Thanks for sharing this great poem. |
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Re: Cuts
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by Strawberry_Stitch on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:18:21 AM AEST
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One thing about SI, it never works. Its just your addiction you cant get enough of
Correct?
Im a cutter. so i know.
Good poem though |
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