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upside down
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:28:58 PM in AEST
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Upside Down
From upside down I see the mould growing on the curtains.
From upside down on my bed, the blood rushes,
From upside down I can see me in the doorway...
Standing so wrong...
Sweying... Still... sweying.
A dress I've never seen before,
So soaked in blood...
From upside down I see I've been crying.
From upside down I see I'm in pain.
From upside down I see I've got his gun,
From upside down I see inside,
From upside down I see the bullet,
From upside down I see me standing... falling
I see me take the gun,
And I see the bullet kill me one last time.
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Re: upside down
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:40:23 PM AEST
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| interesting.. i love it!!! |
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Re: upside down
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:24:41 AM AEST
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| Cool poem, different but to the point. |
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Re: upside down
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by Mihiri on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:32:29 AM AEST
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Awesome! I've never thought of writing a poem from that angle! Well done! It's a damn pity I found it in the least read section. Kepp it up! This is AWEsome!
-Mihiri
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