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Conversation between Mortal and Satan
Contributed by
upomik
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:25:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I wish you would hurry and decide my fate
And not toss me around like a fish with its bait
I'm still alive and I'm tired of the wait
Are you taking me or not?
Be patient my child for murder is an art
I have to find the right scene and actor for the part
This kind of stuff has to come from the heart
After all...it IS my job...
Whatever...please just stop the rain
If I did go what would I obtain?
What would I lose? What would I gain?
Do tell...
You'd lose the burden of mortal shame
As my Queen you'd have everlasting fame
Everyone in Hell would know your name
It's what you've always wanted...
Get lost Devil! I changed my mind!
I tripped over some sense that someone left for me to find
Give me a second to let the tape rewind
Here's what I found...
You NEVER help people
Copyright ©
upomik
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2004-11-29 22:25:53]
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Re: Conversation between Mortal and Satan
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:01:47 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. i although think differently. |
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Re: Conversation between Mortal and Satan
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by freckle on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:14:26 PM AEST
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| Good write. I liked the flow. |
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Re: Conversation between Mortal and Satan
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by tin on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:43:54 PM AEST
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| great poem. have you ever thought of putting the words to music? my first thought after i finished reading was that it's like a modern (darker) rendition of the devil went down to georgia. |
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