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Autumn Day in Georgia
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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What a lovely day
to relax away.
Sit and contemplate.
Meditate.
Hesitate.
Breathe fresh air
and vegetate.
Sky so blue
way up high
far above the tallest pines.
Wispy white puffs
of condensation.
Make for quite the conversation.
Glimpse of a plane.
Silver sun colors
catch my wandering eye.
Gentle warmth of the
friendly sun.
Keeping me......Comfortably numb
on this Autumn day.
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
... [
2004-11-29 22:08:49]
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Re: Autumn Day in Georgia
(User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:41:28 AM AEST
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A really nice flowing and gentle feel, Laura. I really like it. It is very relaxing. Has a very pleasant mental imagery......
Keep up the good work
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Re: Autumn Day in Georgia
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:03:34 PM AEST
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| ehhhh Another Georgia write.. |
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Re: Autumn Day in Georgia
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by mysticaldancer on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:08:11 AM AEST
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| loved the use of imagery...it was almost like i was there myself...beautiful poem! |
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