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With you

Contributed by daydreamer22 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:58:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

You call me on your cell
You tell me your a block away and want to see me
I stand out front waiting for you
I get in and kiss you sweetly

Driving down the highway
Nearing your house
You turn off and stop
You tell me that you love me
Much more than anything you want to be with me

I feel the same way
You put a blindfold over my eyes
Trust me...
The car starts back up and turns

I don't know where we are going
It is a surprise...
We stop once again and you lead me out of the car
When I open my eyes we are in the park

By a fountain flowing with crystal blue water
You are down on one knee
I know the question that awaits me
YES! I will....
Tears of joy streaming down my face

The moment I have been waiting for my whole life is finally here
We stand kissing for a matter of minutes
We hop back in the car
Speeding down the highway
In a hurry to go tell everyone

All of the sudden a car comes out of nowhere
We are in a head on collision
I hear sirens blaring
We are rushed into the ambulance

I finally wake up
Where is he!!!
I am now out of the bed
Rushing around looking for him

The nurse comes in
Breaks the bad news
I am sorry miss but we lost him a few hours ago...
Tears flowing down my face

I realize he is really gone
How could this happen to me
It was all my fault
I told him to hurry so I could show everyone

I love him and we will be together...never...
I think of him often and always
I miss him...

Copyright © daydreamer22 ... [ 2004-11-29 21:58:47]
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Re: With you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:50:47 AM AEST
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sadness... but a really good poem...

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