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whatever
Contributed by
amatt
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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gun is loaded
and the knife is sharpened
your ready to leave your life
your deciding on how to do it
and now no one is to stop you
your gonna do this
its gonna be the end now
your gonna show everyone
thats ever doubted you
that they should have given you a chance
see your only remembered when your dead
then everyone wants you back
cuz they realize that life just isnt the same
weather your popular
or never talked to
with out you...wait what am i saying
thats bull*****
no one would care so blow your head off
slit your wrists
hey this is only my take on it
weather you like it or not
i dont care
Copyright ©
amatt
... [
2004-11-29 21:40:03]
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Re: whatever
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:44:36 PM AEST
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| That is a nice write...and I must once again disagree. There is someone out there who cares. Always. Maybe you just can't see them yet. |
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Re: whatever
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:51:48 PM AEST
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| i who once wrote things like this dont agree with it anymore...powerful write. |
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Re: whatever
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:53:58 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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