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cruelity of this world
Contributed by
amatt
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:34:27 PM in AEST
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and theres an old man
laying in the hospital
about die
and no one can save him now
mean while in a little town
theres a young girl
and she thinks her life sucks
so shes gonna shoot her self right now
and across country
there an older boy
just got fired
and working for minimum wage
has to work
because his mom is depending on him
they can barely make it by
and then there is an old woman
laying in her bed
she is about to die
now what is the moral of the story you ask
there is none but it shows this world can be cruel
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2004-11-29 21:34:27]
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Re: cruelity of this world
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:45:48 PM AEST
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| Nice write...actually a good look at the way alot of the world is. |
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Re: cruelity of this world
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:45:48 PM AEST
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| Nice write...actually a good look at the way alot of the world is. |
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Re: cruelity of this world
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:48:02 PM AEST
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| Good ideas but seemed to lack poetic direction. Much peace. |
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Re: cruelity of this world
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:55:57 PM AEST
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| the cruelity could be a lot worse than this. good write. |
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