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you make me
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:47:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You make me
Look what you've done,
You've made me cry again.
Given me a new sad feeling to write about.
Just another poem.
You made me cry.
You make me so sad some days.
I know I love you when I shouldn't.
I know you don't love me back,
But then again, who ever does.
You've made me cry again...
To the point I wish you never talked to me.
Just like the others, you were so perfect.
Way too good for me.
As always.
No one wants the bruised fruit,
They want the forbidden fruit,
The fruit on the tree...
Just out of their reach.
Damn you make me so sad mate,
So your just another poem.
Another person I cant have.
Another thing in life I have to get over.
You've got me crying... I wish to go you knew.
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Re: you make me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:52:13 PM AEST
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| good job. i can relate... |
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Re: you make me
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:06:32 PM AEST
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| great write as usual. |
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Re: you make me
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by hot-shot on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:51:21 AM AEST
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Wow Wow joebot u really make me amazing & beautiful
hav hugz & smiles
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