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Promising forever
Contributed by
gery_giggles
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Slow hands moving together,
sweet kisses promising forever,
and a gentil hug holding me close,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.
Eyes telling me no lies,
a mouth carassing every inch of who i am,
your body meets mine
bringing a world to life,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.
Our hearts so close,
even with the distance
a love nothing can break,
and those oh so sweet
kisses that promise forever
make everythinhg alright,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.
Your the one i cant
stay away from,
thses gentil hands that fit in mine
make my heart beat faster,
that smile you have when you
see me, melts me inside.
And those oh so sweet kisses
that promise forever.....
Baby i think this is a good
thing we have.
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Re: Promising forever
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by shattered_heart on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:36:35 PM AEST
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Awww...so sweet and romantic. I love it!
- Rachelle |
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Re: Promising forever
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by Niccy on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:45:54 PM AEST
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| That is so sweet, it's a really good poem. I bet he did like it. |
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Re: Promising forever
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:55:29 PM AEST
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| great poem! there's so much love in it! |
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Re: Promising forever
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:25:16 AM AEST
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long time no hear from you Gerry, what a lovely and cute write, very sweet and so awwwwww lol
pixie xx |
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Re: Promising forever
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:50:20 PM AEST
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| awww that's too cute!! good job and keep writing!! |
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