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One
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Am
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:28:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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One week, changes my mind
One day, decides my destiny
One night, shatters my hopes
One hour, creates moral decisions
One minute, is the difference between my life & death
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2004-11-29 19:28:43]
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Re: One
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:58:31 PM AEST
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| short and to the point. powerful. i think people can relate to this poem in their own ways. though this one was written for you to only understand to its true extent. |
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Re: One
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:56:23 PM AEST
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Re: One
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by fielding88 on
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| U minced no words here, and you delivered your point very well. I enjoyed reading this because it was jsut so philisophical in its simplicity. I mean, wow. Powerful words here, great write. |
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