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Sick In My Mind
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:27:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Someone help me
I'm sinking
Deeper and deeper
Into the darkness
I cry out
But no one helps
As I sink deeper
Into the cold
I cannot fight it
I'm sinking further
Into the abyss of the night
Coldness washes over me
Like black waves
Upon white sand
Tears fall from my eyes
Like warm fingers
Brushing my frozen cheeks
I'm alone in the dark
No friends to lend an ear
No love to over come my fear
I hold the blade
Frozen in my numb hand
I hold it over
My reched heart
A single crystal tear falls
To mix with my blood
It is over
No more pain
No turning back
I am finally free.
Copyright ©
DesolantDreamer
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2004-11-29 19:27:16]
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Re: Sick In My Mind
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by Irish_Flame on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:23:42 PM AEST
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| It's good that you can write about those kind of feelings...lets people like me know that we aren't alone in that feeling... |
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Re: Sick In My Mind
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:01:30 PM AEST
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| amazing write. so powerful and emotional im speechless. written so well and i loved the analogies. you might sink further and further into darkness but you have yet to learn how to swim. floaties would be nice wouldnt they? =] |
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Re: Sick In My Mind
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by upomik on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:09:06 PM AEST
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| great write. i'm actually feeling that way right now. keep on writing and check out some of my stuff. |
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Re: Sick In My Mind
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:26:35 AM AEST
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well expressed, better to release these feelings that bottling them up *hugs*
pixie xx |
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