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love just sucks!
Contributed by
cutdeeperXalone
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:47:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want to give up
my dreams are going down the drain
my emotions change
and on comes the pain
every last breath is a cry
skin and blood on my bed
the remains of a lifeless body
morbid dreams will forever set me free
mindless hell
pain smeered across your face
all because you said I love you
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cutdeeperXalone
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2004-11-29 15:47:29]
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Re: love just sucks!
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by xxDeathxTOxKristixx on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:57:43 PM AEST
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| its a excellent write....i know how you feel i got my heart ripped out from someone recently and i havent gotten over then but i dont want to ever....your poem is beautiful and i think that you should continue in your writing.....your poem sort of reminds me or my lost love... |
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Re: love just sucks!
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by DesperateSoul on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:11:29 PM AEST
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Those feelings you don't hold alone!! For in this chaos filled world, many of us silently moan! Well written!! Keep Posting and keep writing always!!!!!!
~*D.$.~* |
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Re: love just sucks!
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:19:31 AM AEST
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Just know your not alone.
Great write
Liam x |
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