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untill i met u
Contributed by
cutdeeperXalone
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:46:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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did you ever thingk how i would feel
i was scared i was soo alone
I miss you
but no words could ever bring you back
all the years and all the tears
trust me i have tried and cried
no whare to run lost in all thought of mine
i cant have anymore fun
all the memories will forever be
kept in my heart
but sometimes people just pull apart
you never think heartache is going to burn
it's crazy, the more i want to love you
but i just can't
in life thier are so many things to be learned
open chest heart on the floors
i never wished i was dead
untill i met you
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Re: untill i met u
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by xxDeathxTOxKristixx on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:02:07 PM AEST
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i think that one day you will be a great writer....again truley beautiful.....and yet agian it reminds me of my lost love...
-kristina |
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Re: untill i met u
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:21:11 PM AEST
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I see insight and a potential within your writing....
Keep it up! |
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