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what happned to us?

Contributed by cutdeeperXalone on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:44:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I sit in my room
and the memories are everywhare
whare did we go wrong?
perfect, right that was it
we were not at all perfect
but seeing you is now a must
living in tears and fears
crying, this is all my fault
none of this would have happned
what ever happned to us?
whare did we go wrong?
all the tears and the years
gone....perfect is an over used word
sevan letters, millions of uses
over used and dried up
what ever happned to us?
whare did we go wrong?

Copyright © cutdeeperXalone ... [ 2004-11-29 15:44:22]
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Re: what happned to us? (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:43:38 PM AEST
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nice write,it was very touching and sad,u must remember and achknowledge the fact that things happen for a reason,some r not good reasons and some r good reason,its something we all need to learn,and most of us,myself included tend to try to erase that part of living bc we always think we did something wrong and we cant do anything right or as u say "perfect".nice write i really enjoyed reading and no worries hun,i and i'm sure lots more can relate to this,keep up the great writes,ur very good,i give u 5 *s!!!!!

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