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I Want To Cut My Self Again
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:38:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In my room
My four walls
Start showing me my past
So I am sitting here with a piece of broken glass
I want to cut my self again
I emerge in the falling rain
Cascading from your eyes
Images moving fast through my window
As if I were on a bullet train
Pictures of how we were
Show me what I miss and it tears me apart
After all the time there is still the hurt
After all this time I feel no worth
I take it to my skin
I cut my self but do not bleed
Even that you have taken away form me
It comforts me no more
I emerge in the falling rain
Cascading from your eyes
Images moving fast through my window
As if I were on a bullet train
I have no apologies
For what I am about to do
I take it to my chest and
I try to drive it through my heart
But it’s become so small and cold
The glass breaks leaving it’s shards in me
Now I just hurt even more
I can’t take this anymore
All I do is want to die
This life was never for me
And I am tired of asking why
I always have to hurt this way
I take another piece
Of what once my mirror
I take it to my wrist again
I cut so deep I die
In my room
My four walls
Start showing me my past
So I am here sitting with a piece of broken glass
I want to cut my self again
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by diamond_tears on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:46:50 PM AEST
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very moving- pm me if u ever need to talk. i know some of how your feeling
brilliantly written xxx |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:07:16 PM AEST
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| I don't know what to say..I'm in pain too..not the same perhaps..not wanting to cut; but wanting to die..I liked the cadence and repetition..would like to ride a bullet train.. bit off the subject..lol. |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:08:29 PM AEST
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| I really like this one :) Thanks for sharing |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:49:14 PM AEST
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| i can feel your pain.... |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:01:26 AM AEST
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I guess i was lucky to get first read of this before i went to bed last night...
I still think its amazing,
In the short time we have been talking John you have become a big part of my life.
I pray that you make it through your days.....
Love
Stace xxx |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by mylastwords on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:35:55 AM AEST
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hey,
u know i love your writes, this one is just breath taking. I really love it. It's full of emotion, I could feel it as i was readin it.
Take care and i'll talk to you soon,
luv Jade xxooxx |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:38:29 AM AEST
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awww John *hugs* it is so easy to pick the glass,knife or wahtever up, you have been doing so well, please try and stay strong, you can do it, I know you can, you are having a bad time of iot tta the moment, I am here for you if you ever need a chat, a very sad and touching poem,
love your friend pix exx |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by WildfireRose on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:11:35 PM AEST
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| your sorrow is expressed beautifully... habg in there :) |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:13:05 PM AEST
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So many visions running through my head now..
i can relate x x |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:27:47 PM AEST
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| Great write, I love glass, broken or whole, shattered or together. it sounds just sounds like my soul, anyway awesome write, stay strong you're not alone. I can tell that you are surrounded by friends that care from reading the other comments. |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:10:26 AM AEST
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i don't know what to say that hasn't already been said but wanted to post a comment because this poem deserves one.
i know it's not original but you aren't alone, i can relate.
be strong, take care
scarlett |
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Re: I Want To Cut My Self Again
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:54:11 AM AEST
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I am commenting on this because I too am staying up this night and trying not to cut my wrist. I know how hard it is and I just hope that I will be able to make it through. Now, back to the subject... This was a well writen poem its words showed many images and convaed pain having to put up with this fight is the hardest thing to do, I just hope that you made it through as I do hope that I will to. (I think that I will try writing something insted.) I will pray for you that you will never have to go through this pain again. Be well
*H_S* |
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