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Scarlet Ocean Waves
Contributed by
Overstated
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:08:19 PM in AEST
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Scarlet Ocean cries down on me
Pelting me with reasons
Destroying my heart fully
Basking in the temperamental air
My statue of the blues
And your sun kissed hair
I could face your waves,
Each day I could stand them
But I couldn’t face all they had to say
The salty tears of despair
Always quenches my trust
And washes away, any chance of repair
The Scarlet Ocean Waves are too strong
Your lips too remote
I am a boat, you an island, distance too long
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Overstated
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2004-11-29 14:08:19]
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Re: Scarlet Ocean Waves
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by Dominick-Destruction on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:36:57 PM AEST
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I feel the deep care in this..the depereation & The sorrow...It really got through to me.
..Lovely.
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Re: Scarlet Ocean Waves
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by nascarfive on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:26:16 PM AEST
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pelting me with reasons...
I don't like reasons either.. great write. |
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Re: Scarlet Ocean Waves
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:21:39 PM AEST
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How I feel your pain,but your heart will mend dear friend,and the distance will grow wider,but you'll find an oasis for your heart,a perfect island where the boat shall never distance itself. The anchor will have settled=)
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Re: Scarlet Ocean Waves
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 11:16:50 PM AEST
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this is beautiful... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Scarlet Ocean Waves
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:52:22 AM AEST
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| Wow you really care for this person. |
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