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The Bloody Bride
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 12:55:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The tale of the bloody bride,
Has many dark secrets to hide,
She wore her pristine white wedding dress,
She felt the silk on her skin caress.
In the mirror she stared,
She wondered why he hadn’t cared,
The night he slept with that whore,
Laughing at me as he walked out the door.
He didn’t think I’d ever find out,
But my mind was crammed with doubt,
I followed him on that November night,
All the while keeping out of sight.
I watched as he approached some girl,
I was so mad I felt my hair curl,
But I knew I would get my revenge,
As my heartache I had to avenge.
We were getting married the very next day,
But for his infidelity he had to pay,
I went home put on my dress & waited,
He was going to die tonight that much was fated.
I took a knife & waited in our bedroom,
I knew that he would be home soon,
I heard the key in the door I heard his voice,
In his death I would soon rejoice.
Up he came smelling of cigarettes & raw sex,
I don’t think he knew what was coming next,
I calmly walked over to my love,
Over my head I held the knife high above.
The look on his face was such a picture,
He never planned this in life’s scripture,
I stabbed & stabbed until there was nothing left,
Of the man who once stole my breath.
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pixie
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2004-11-29 12:55:52]
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Re: The Bloody Bride
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:08:15 PM AEST
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Bloody hell pixie i'm glad i aint marrying you!!
Great write though!
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Re: The Bloody Bride
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:28:57 PM AEST
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wow pixie!
I agree with johnny, but at the same time I can't help but admire this...so very well written! |
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Re: The Bloody Bride
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by EternalNight4x on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:52:45 PM AEST
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| great write, very well expressed and a little pyschotic but still well written, I also agree glad I'm not marrying you lol...well keep up the great writes |
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Re: The Bloody Bride
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:49:35 PM AEST
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i wish i could some day read somethign happy from you
you know i care about you |
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Re: The Bloody Bride
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:30:29 AM AEST
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stabbed!!!..oh..very angry and restless...I know this anger comes out of broken heart..
o.k dear..peace be to you..hugs:-) venkat |
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Re: The Bloody Bride
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by pander on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:44:34 PM AEST
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My dear Pixie,
This is one of the best and most entertaining poems I have ever read! I just love it!
I can't think of any words to describe quite how good this piece is. A real landmark that I will never forget.
Once again, I just love it!
With much admiration,
Pander
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