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She Took My Soul To Trial

Contributed by Joker17 on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 05:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

“She Took My Soul To Trial” - by J. Samuelson 01/26/2001

She Took My Soul To Trial
And hung it, without a true conviction
Passing down her frigid judgment
With only circumstantial evidence.

A heart left scarred and battered
Pumping only ice cold, streams of pain
Now left in a central massacre
Her total slaughter of my lost will.

Her selfish, lack of contribution
Her own fear, that left me bleed
Her self inflicted, indecision
Made her much to blind to see.

If she had only opened her eyes
Before she passed her sentence
Could she have missed exhibit A
Overlooking, the key of conscience?

How did she become, both judge and jury?
Who gave her that powerful authority?
Why did she abuse the power of my love
And choose to damn me for an eternity?

She now has won, and I have lost
Her decision final, no appeals
I have to accept my consequence
Of this cruel penalty, she has imposed.

She may as well, forced execution
My black grave chamber, left within
Genocide, with useless pride
She Took My Soul To Trial.

This mandatory, sentence now
Disguised, to hide her guilt
She hides behind her masquerade
She Took My Soul To Trial.

If roles would just once, be reversed
And I took her soul to trial
I believe the fate, I would hand down
Would be, guilty as charged, no parole.

But I don’t have the self esteem
She must, she reins in denial
She now should be, confined to guilt
She Took My Soul To Trial.

Copyright Â© Joker17 ... [ 2002-11-24 05:40:00]
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Re: She Took My Soul To Trial (User Rating: 1 )
by KM on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 07:45:29 AM AEST
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I like the message of your poem and there probably not too many who can't relate at least to some degree.

It's a great concept and mostly well written but becomes a little forced at the end. I mean a bit too repetitive of the title line. A good read anyway!

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