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Cursed Walk
Contributed by
Vampyre_BloodWraith
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:04:53 AM in AEST
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Cursed Walk
Surrounded in walls of flesh,
Struggling imprisoned souls,
Hands stretch forth pleading,
Trapped within torments grasp,
Each swimming in aguish,
Erupting gangrenous ooze,
From their pores it weeps,
Tortured eyes at me staring,
This path is mine to walk,
Tasting the bitterness of defeat,
Wading through blood,
Deep red and innocent,
Nightmares caress embraced,
Nourishing my eternal thirst,
Quenching a hunger for life,
Feasting upon deaths hoard,
Hopeless cries echo in this tomb,
Haunted souls fighting for release,
Each face I gaze upon set in stone,
Another painted in internal loss,
Darkness hides my sorrow,
Drenched in deaths shadow,
Forever losing a bit more,
Slipping deeper into my curse.
By Vampyre_BloodWraith
Copyright ©
Vampyre_BloodWraith
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2004-11-29 09:04:53]
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by Dominick-Destruction on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:23:03 AM AEST
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I'm speechless....O how i can relate to your words...They touched me.
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:38:56 AM AEST
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wow!
i'm speechless... that was awesome... not i guess not for you, so i'm osrry that you have to go through this.
superb poem though...! |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by Jodwin on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:48:07 AM AEST
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| It's an ok write, though in my opinion the second verse doesn't fit into it. |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:10:17 AM AEST
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Great write I love to see how dark a person can go. To see the side of the blackest soul which in my mind is the whitest snow. "GREAT WRITE"
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:33:59 AM AEST
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I must say your write really moved me alot.
good job. |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:10:23 AM AEST
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| writen exactly how I like them, I cannot wait to read more by you. |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:37:41 AM AEST
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Well...
I think it all fits together perfectly, including the second verse/stanza or whatever you want to call the bloody thing. This is an amazing write and I hope you are going to grace us all with more of your work soon.
Take care
- Becca |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:03:09 PM AEST
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I love poetry that is able to move me and
this is no exception. It's very deep and
emotional. Sad, but a poem well
worth the read.
Great job!
~Breezy |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:57:41 PM AEST
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| wow... sounds like a sort of hell... very vividly written |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by shelby on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:46:46 AM AEST
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very deep
Michelle |
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Re: Cursed Walk
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:18:52 PM AEST
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| This poem was very deep and powerful. Nicely chosen words. The first part reminds me of the cave outside of ursula's lair with the little souls needing help on The Little Mermaid but about 5 times worse... |
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