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Lament
Contributed by
MasterWeasel
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:44:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Penance brings me no resolve
Nor my sins could it absolve
Corruption seeps deep within
I try to fight, but never win
I stand a slave to my dirty deeds
My soul's devoured, and evil breeds
Wickedness creeps into my mind
Steers me wrong and makes me blind
Late at night I sit and weep
For promises I couldn't keep
Help is always what I seek
The spirit is willing; the flesh is weak
What is this shell I'm trapped inside
Where bad begins and evils reside
I ponder why I can't escape
This foul and bitter earthly shape
I ask forgiveness, but expect none
I shouldn't be for what I've done
I couldn't stop my own descent
So here I sit in my lament.
Copyright ©
MasterWeasel
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2004-11-29 08:44:53]
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Re: Lament
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by Stitch on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:53:12 AM AEST
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Excellent. Very impressive.
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Re: Lament
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:55:43 AM AEST
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| Wow. Excellent poem. You really have a great talent...I can't wait to read more. |
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Re: Lament
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| I just read a poem you posted today and loved it so decided to come and check you out. You are one powerful writer. I am impressed. Gonna have to check out some more. Peace to you, Laura |
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