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...cuckoo bird...
Contributed by
dominick-destruction
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:21:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Eyes glued shut…mouth wide open,
Trails of spit hang like scallites from your gums…
A gaping red hole emitting cries for attention..
Demanding all the food…
Like a cuckoo bird…
That’s growing fat,
Taking this & all of that…
Plain to see cupidy.
Invading the nest..
& pushing out the rest.
Like a broken old record with pin stuck in then groove,
You sing a repetition of the same old tune..
The same rehearsed lines told over & over you coon…
An oration of *****..
Your mouth & mind brimful of it..
& you believe it? (..or enjoy telling fiction?)
..Your pitiful fantasies
& dissolute delusions…
They’ll be all you have left…with questioning open..
Once you end up alone in a blood stained nest with your wings broken…
© Dominick Destruction 29/sep/o4
Copyright ©
dominick-destruction
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2004-11-29 08:21:53]
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Re: ...cuckoo bird...
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:40:03 AM AEST
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mmm, interesting... quite an d one i must admit.
good though... |
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Re: ...cuckoo bird...
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:59:54 PM AEST
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Re: ...cuckoo bird...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:50:28 AM AEST
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| Is it "cupidy" or "cupidity"? Anyway, I thought this was an excellent angry poem and the metaphor was really different. Cheers! |
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