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FiguringThatItWasPastDue
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:19:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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LatelyIfeellikeIhavebeengutted
Carvedupandscatteredlikedebris
Runtogetherwithsomanythings
Iamnotevenaliveanymore
Withoutpunctuationorreason
Peoplewillfindthiseclecticorqueer
Ifinditfuntionaltothepointofmadness
Weallmustbehaveirrationallyattimes
Withoutapurposeortask
Otherwisesanitywouldtakeoverandthenwherewouldwebe
Screamingfortheinstitutionofchaos
Thatswhere
IwillsleepeasytonightknowingIruinedagoodpeom
Youbraggartsandsocalledpoets
Ihopeyoucanchokethisonedown
Tryingtofinditsmeaningorplacingmeinacategory
Iwillsleepwellknowingthattheycantandneverwill
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2004-11-29 03:19:40]
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Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:39:29 AM AEST
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| A poem with difference, but written by insanity, you have to know before you can walk that road, still I saw the words, felt the flow, dont care wether what you saw in it, I saw an awesome write. |
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Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:49:31 AM AEST
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Is 'funtional' misspelled intentionally?
I'd like to know what you would have wrote instead of this 'bad' poem . . ?
Perhaps time will tell.
Keep writing, DR. |
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Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:36:03 PM AEST
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| lol Dane you crack me up. You'll never fit any "category" though, so you shall always rest assured. :) |
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Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:22:08 PM AEST
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It's good to do this
and defy the establishment's
and fans'
expectations.
There's different ways to do it.
In this case it's very straightforward.
And it made me think,
so then it made me laugh,
because at the end you're
saying the most stuffy
readers probably don't like it
and they can choke on it....
They just read the damn thing.
And there's nothing they can do about it.
--Mothy |
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Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:11:40 PM AEST
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Effing AMAZING, Dane...I loved this...how it was written, the form, the message....greatness
Mason |
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Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:32:18 AM AEST
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| wow, this is awesome, well done! |
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Re: FiguringThatItWasPastDue
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 10:30:56 AM AEST
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Well this is different. It might've come with a headache warning! Lol.
Not sure my poor eyes could take much more, but you held the reader's attention... :)
Functional to the point of madness indeed!
Irrational can be refreshing, ya crazy nut. There! You've been categorized. Ha!
~Scorp |
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