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they call me
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:01:07 PM in AEST
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They Call Me
Do you hear it screaming...
When the day lays you down to rest...
Do you close your eyes...
They say I hate you...
When the day lays you down to rest...
Is there reason for their crying...
When the voices play inside your head...
Is there reason for this dying...
When the day lays you down to rest...
When your whole world is freaking out...
Your brain cant take much more...
And you hear the voices calling you...
Break free...
Break down...
Break out...
What's behind all this madness...
Why do I hear them talking...
When the day lays me down to rest...
They call themselves the devil...
I am possessed...
When the day lays me down to rest...
The TV is talking to me again...
The jug just called my name...
But deep inside my mind they scream...
When the day lays me down to rest...
People torment, trashing broken mind...
People screaming, people needing, over crowded mind...
I'll die here with these voices...
When the day lays me down to rest...
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Re: they call me
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:16:13 PM AEST
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| I thought that it was written well. I can see why this was scary to write. Voices are very powerful. |
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Re: they call me
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:17:47 PM AEST
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| this was creepy. i think this is my new favorite poem that ive read out of all of yours. the fact that youre another southerner has nothing to do with it =] |
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Re: they call me
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by co_cane13 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:07:29 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem, but tell me are the voices you hear, are they your inner demons. or society as you inner mind see it. |
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Re: they call me
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:40:06 PM AEST
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i hear voices sometimes too the do call me and i respond to my mother and she's like i did not call you and i am like oh well they are calling me again
till i find out what they want and do it
sometimes they are just hungry or thirsty
you should try and listen |
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Re: they call me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:41:49 AM AEST
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| awesome well done |
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