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Beautiful Disaster
Contributed by
caughtinadream
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:18:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You're my love
My beautiful disaster
I'd like to know
Exactly what you're after.
Painting portraits of pain
While singing songs of sorrow
My beautiful disaster, I have to ask
But I'll wait until tomorrow.
I live in the moment, focusing on you
I won't let myself worry
My pain has to be through!
My beautiful disaster
What will you turn out to be?
I will laugh, love, and learn
While you mend the shattered pieces of me.
Copyright ©
caughtinadream
... [
2004-11-28 20:18:47]
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Re: Beautiful Disaster
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by skraggs on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:32:55 PM AEST
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| deeper than this punk will ever know |
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Re: Beautiful Disaster
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by LilGnefkow on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:37:35 PM AEST
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| You have TONS of potential. This poem, I can tell, is the beginning of something great. This is beautiful. |
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Re: Beautiful Disaster
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:33:34 PM AEST
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| didnt exactly understand it, but i still loved it =] this was written extremely well. keep it up. =] |
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