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Inequality
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:22:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This love is an inequality
mine unequal to yours
holding tight to your illusions of perfection
you are blinded to me
never realizing that my affection
is a flickering candle flame in
a violent storm
Copyright ©
HellsLibrarian
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2004-11-28 18:22:21]
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Re: Inequality
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:37:02 PM AEST
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such a way with word in a few sentences you evoked the most lovely feelings
Michelle |
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Re: Inequality
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:55:05 PM AEST
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Nice picture at the end of the poem. Rather sad though that the love is not equal. It seems to make things more difficult.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Inequality
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by xMizeriex on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:13:54 AM AEST
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Nice imagery.
Bx |
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Re: Inequality
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by NeonHusky on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 09:03:07 PM AEST
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| i have to agree with michelle on this one....and i do like the last bit of imagery too |
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