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miss you always
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:00:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Not a moment in life goes by since you left that I don't think about you...
No sigh I make isn't about how much I miss you but your not here and I have to live without you.
When I'm trapped inside my mind crying, it's you I'm thinking about...
Forever such a sad memory of when you left...
I knew you would leave,
I knew you had to leave,
But it didn't stop me loving you.
No, It didn't stop me from pouring my heart out,
It didn't stop me from missing you so much right now.
Better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all the say...
What about a forever distant unrequited love...?
What about my forever bleeding heart...?
Forever miss you always... what about that?
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Re: miss you always
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:04:44 PM AEST
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awww.. so sad... beautifully heartfelt... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: miss you always
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by HellsLibrarian on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:17:50 PM AEST
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| very poignant. I really like your style. Also, the trapped in the mind crying bit was a good image. |
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Re: miss you always
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by LilGnefkow on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:41:41 PM AEST
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| This is a pretty good poem. It explains a lot, I can tell. You're really expressing yourself. Good for you!!!*smiley face* |
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Re: miss you always
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:39:55 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write as always. |
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