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ALONE
Contributed by
PIXXIE
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:52:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I've cried for hours and hurt myself bad
Pulled out my hair so afraid I've gone Mad.
My body so exhausted that I've wanted to Die
Sat screaming in the mirror asking God WHY?
Uncontrolable rages blackening my Soul
My Identity, my Life, this addiction has stole
Alone for so long my reflection replaced
Who is this strange person I'm now sat faced
Wild and scared her eyes they do tell
her inner turmoil this cold, lonely Hell
The worst revalation is yet to come
The person sat opposite is my very own mum.
Copyright ©
PIXXIE
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2004-11-28 17:52:18]
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Re: ALONE
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:26:50 PM AEST
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ahhhh hugs this is so sad beautifully written as always but I wish there was something I could do to make you feel better
Michelle |
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Re: ALONE
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:09:33 PM AEST
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| Such a sad poem, beautifully writen but sad, I hope all gets better, have faith...............Mike |
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Re: ALONE
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:24:57 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: ALONE
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:48:34 PM AEST
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| powerful and hardhitting write written well. |
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Re: ALONE
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by pixie on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:20:44 AM AEST
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wow, that was very hard hitting, well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: ALONE
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:08:25 AM AEST
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Wow, this is amazing.
Everything about it is good.
*hugs* I'm so sorry you have to go through this.
Keep it up, I'll look out for more by you.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: ALONE
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by lovesucks on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:27:02 AM AEST
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Pixie you've done it again, you touched my soul...You are an excellent, expressive poet.
XOXO it gets better.
Theresa |
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