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Repair my broken wings
Contributed by
Ryoko
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:51:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Black crimson shattered feathers,
Pinned to your tainted body,
Blood outlining my features,
Bruised grey eyes return yours.
Clotted holes of soulless memories,
Falling from my tortured hate,
Forms of white fresh wings,
Ripped by the constant doubt.
Emptied rusted veins rim,
Dried all around my footles prints,
Unknowingly reaching the edge of nightmares,
Genuine blue eyes are all that care.
Smartly deceptive manipulating words,
Cut threw the pure silk on my back,
Purple stems create imaginary images,
Held up by pins dug into my neck.
Shortly relieving painful bliss,
Black and white evenly bled,
Ignorant actions make me notice,
Only you can repair my broken wings.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-11-28 17:51:31]
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Re: Repair my broken wings
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:56:03 PM AEST
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Re: Repair my broken wings
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:39:35 PM AEST
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emotions running wild through this poem you did a great job Im sorry for all your pain though
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Re: Repair my broken wings
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:41:52 PM AEST
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wow....this is absolutely brilliant.....i loved it
Lots of Love
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Re: Repair my broken wings
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:51:05 PM AEST
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