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Alone In The Darkness
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:36:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darkness comes on swiftful feet
Creeping silently towards me
I don't see it coming, flying at me
It hits its target effectively, deadly
I am lost in an endless void
Alone; only myself, and the darkness
and the scary part; I like it.
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DesolantDreamer
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2004-11-28 17:36:00]
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Re: Alone In The Darkness
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Alone In The Darkness
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by CaddishCut on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:31:20 PM AEST
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| That is very orgasmic. Gave me chills. "I like it"...that's sick and twisted...just what I like =) |
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Re: Alone In The Darkness
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:44:25 PM AEST
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this is a very good write...i loved it...great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Alone In The Darkness
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:23:40 PM AEST
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| great write. written well. |
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Re: Alone In The Darkness
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 10:42:35 PM AEST
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| Would you believe I was only Fourteen when I wrote that? sheesh...I even surprise myself |
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