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Addiction
Contributed by
ladymaki
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:16:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It's like a bug that eats away at your happy times..
like a pill that's warn off,way past it's prime.
The scars that stay, left on your soul
seeking help, an unreachable goal.
Blood that falls with no reason why,
watching it flood as you start to cry.
Knowing you're throwing your life away..
but you'll only do it for 'one more day'!
You watch in wonder as your friends start to leave,
as you hide the blood stains left on your sleeve.
You swore you wouldn't let it come down to this,
loosing the things you love for one second of bliss..
Long sleeved shirts and pants down to your feet,
covering the cuts you thought you could beat.
Slowly hiding inside of your head..
eventually you realize you're better off dead..
Copyright ©
ladymaki
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2004-11-28 17:16:53]
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Re: Addiction
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:49:55 PM AEST
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| wow, this is so true.. well done |
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Re: Addiction
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:25:57 PM AEST
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| i agree with bo. excellent write. powerful and well written. |
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Re: Addiction
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by Delusions on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:58:10 AM AEST
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| wow... this blew me away... its an awsome write... putting into words the situation i find myself in as well... keep up this great work ~DeLuSiOnS~ |
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Re: Addiction
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by pixie on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:21:18 AM AEST
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brilliant and awesome,
pixie xx |
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