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My release
Contributed by
mercedes
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:04:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No one understands why I go to you
Why I let you do the things you do
Put a gag in my mouth
Keep the screams from getting out
Tie me up, keep me still
Leave me loose, the struggle is a thrill
The slap upon my face
The paddling upon my rear
Slow and soft at first
From hand to paddle to whip
A soft red glow slowly forms
Redder the harder you hit
At first I silently take it
Soon tears began to form
Crying softly no one hears
The pain builds up, no escape
I twist and struggle in your arms
You never let up
Before too long, my tears really fall
I cry and scream, letting it all out
You understand the moment has come
You lay the whip, the paddle aside
Into your arms you cradle my body
My weeping continues
It’s a release of stress I feel
The same some feel when cutting themselves
No alcohol or drugs for me
A slap on the ass is all I need
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2004-11-28 16:04:43]
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Re: My release
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by Jen54 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:25:36 PM AEST
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interesting write
Keep it up |
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Re: My release
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:40:16 PM AEST
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| Interesting...keep writing...I'd like to read more. |
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Re: My release
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:18:05 PM AEST
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Hmmm, masochism as a stress release. Interesting concept. Strange, but interesting. Better than cutting and sucide, I must confess.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: My release
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:19:37 PM AEST
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| few will ever understand this need.....atleast you've found your facilitator.....some of us ....all we have to surrender to is the quest to find that "one"......this was a perfect piece..... |
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Re: My release
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:51:44 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: My release
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:36:36 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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