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My words paint a mosaic
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:09:05 PM in AEST
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My words paint a mosaic
Not easily understood up close
But from far you see they are of you
Your eyes and lips and how I want to kiss
Every part of you even the cuts on your wrist
Because it is just another part of what makes you whole
And I bound my self to you to and to your soul
To give to you all my strength
And make you my world for all the length
That this soul of mine has to live
And give you all I have to give
My words they love you
And become better all for you
They have no bounds when it comes to
Every detail of you face
And to the beauty that is you
So rare and sweet and true
They want to bring you to a better place
When you feel down and torn apart
Because of you god greatest work of art
My words take form and are alive
So that you would feel like I am by your side
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Re: My words paint a mosaic
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:15:36 PM AEST
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This is a fabulous poem,
It holds so much love and it makes me smile.
nice one.
Love
Stace x |
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Re: My words paint a mosaic
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:30:25 PM AEST
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loving and beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: My words paint a mosaic
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:27:27 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. =] |
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Re: My words paint a mosaic
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by venkat on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 12:02:18 AM AEST
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| Oh..very beautiful and excellent.:-)venkat |
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Re: My words paint a mosaic
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:05:17 AM AEST
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| are you East Indian? |
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Re: My words paint a mosaic
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by pixie on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:24:10 AM AEST
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awesome write,
pixie xx |
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Re: My words paint a mosaic
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:08:55 PM AEST
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| Mmm... I love the title, I was thinking about doing something mosaicy... |
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