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You killed my sister
Contributed by
socialburnin
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:48:24 PM in AEST
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You hit the stop sign
You hit my sister
You killed the flowers
You killed my sister
My parents took her away
Took her to the hospital
I stayed there
I ran after your car
I threw things
I screamed things
You stopped
We fought
The chain mark
Still there
On my arms
My sister
Not here
Shes gone
And you should be to
But they sent you home
Not guilty
You killed my sister
She was 6
You killed my sister
She was beautiful
You killed my sister
I loved her so much
Why did you tkae her away?
She was so beautiful
She was so smart
She was many things
Now shes gone
You killed my sister
Why did you take her away from me?
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Re: You killed my sister
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by pixie on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:49:46 PM AEST
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a very sad poem, must have tugged on your heart when you wrote this *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: You killed my sister
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:02:09 PM AEST
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very sad poem... i'm sorry for ur lose... it must have been hard for u to write this poem...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: You killed my sister
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:39:08 PM AEST
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Very good write. I really am sorry for this pain. Just don't blame it on the person whos "fault" it was. I am sure they feel really bad and really guilty and if they don't, they are a horrid person. If you ever want to talk, I'm here.
*HUGZ* Stay Strong
~ Marissa |
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Re: You killed my sister
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by aringb on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:55:35 PM AEST
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| A very sad poem. I am sorry for the loss of your sister. I, too, have lost a sister, but she was not as young as yours and she had lived a long and happy life. |
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Re: You killed my sister
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:04:28 PM AEST
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| wow, i feel for your loss, this is a touching write, well done |
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Re: You killed my sister
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:22:02 PM AEST
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I can tell you really meant the things you wrote in this poem. I'm so sorry for your loss. Take care.
Katie |
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Re: You killed my sister
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by zenmind on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:01:12 PM AEST
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Oh my God. I can't believe this actually happend to you. I am so so so sorry. I can't imagine what that must be like for you and your family. I like how you told this story. You really let your thought process flow naturally, and that makes you a unique poet.
Be True,
zenmind |
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