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love sucks
Contributed by
cutdeeperXalone
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:22:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I want to give up
my dreams are going down the drain
my emotions change
and on comes the pain
every last breath is a cry
skin and blood on my bed
the remains of a lifeless body
morbid dreams will forever set me free
mindless hell
pain smeered across your face
all because you said I love you
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cutdeeperXalone
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2004-11-28 12:22:14]
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Re: love sucks
(User Rating: 1 )
by lilschizoboy07 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:29:31 PM AEST
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| Wow.So much emotion you only find in great poetry. |
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Re: love sucks
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by xMizeriex on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:14:35 AM AEST
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Powerful stuff.
Bx |
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Re: love sucks
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by oxluvlaughingxo on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 05:27:35 PM AEST
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| wow so much emotion, i could feel every word. i love it, keep up the great work! |
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