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Doriens Picture, Mangs and Tom
Contributed by
little_genna
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:12:42 AM in AEST
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My beautifully sad eyes wish to weep,
Last night I cried a few tears before I fell asleep.
Still it was not enough, my soul needs healing,
My tears will help heal the wounds that need sealing.
Heartache will hold me for a couple of weeks,
Whilst I regain my composure as I feel so weak.
Friends like Doriens picture and Mangs are happy to be of aid,
My friend Tom stopped me feeling afraid.
Tom told me to phone him if I needed someone to talk to,
He is someone I hold in my heart with great value.
He may be an old ex boyfriends older brother,
Yet we were more suited as lovers.
Doriens Picture or John wrote a wonderful poem,
And let me know how much I mean.
He lets me see the person I am.
Having friends like him is a blissful dream.
Now, that leaves Mangs, he fills my heart with joy,
He shows me life is there to enjoy.
His words are full of kindness and wisdom.
All I can say he is incredibly awesome.
I know I didn’t need to write this poem,
They say I do not owe them.
As they are simply being my friends.
And with them I will quickly make amends.
SJ
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Re: Doriens Picture, Mangs and Tom
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:37:35 AM AEST
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hey hun...
thanks a lot for this.....ur right..u didnt need to...but u made my day...
love u...and will always be ther for you...
Umang.. |
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Re: Doriens Picture, Mangs and Tom
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by pixie on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:11:51 AM AEST
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awww this is a lovely ,beautiful dedication to these 3 wonderful poets. you have many friends on this site, including me *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Doriens Picture, Mangs and Tom
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:30:31 AM AEST
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this is really a great write write and i want to say thank you and that there really was no need to but still thanks
much love
John |
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Re: Doriens Picture, Mangs and Tom
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:18:46 AM AEST
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Beautifully touching...
Jenni |
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