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Happy Homes
Contributed by
HumGirl18
on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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We sit out on the top
Of all our happy homes
Wishing on the stars
Shining in the darkness
That comforts us like
The blankets on our beds.
But those wishing stars are too far away
They don't hear our dreams and
They can't fix these happy homes.
Inside she is screaming
He's drinking once again
The baby won't stop crying
The electricity is out
They couldn't pay the bills
Cause he lost his job again.
And those wishing stars are too far away
They don't hear our dreams and
They can't fix these happy homes.
Now the furnitures on the lawn
And our clothes are in the car
We're going to her mom's
Sleeping on the floor with
That old blanket from my bed, he's gone
Through the window I can see the stars
But those wishing stars are too far away
They don't hear our dreams and
They can't fix these happy homes.
They don't hear my dreams and
They can't fix my broken home
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HumGirl18
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2002-11-23 20:00:00]
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Re: Happy Homes
(User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 06:32:20 AM AEST
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This is really good, And it says alot. It send images to the mind, and that means that you really have comething here.
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Re: Happy Homes
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by Sarah22 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:06:54 AM AEST
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| good work :*). |
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