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my little star
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:01:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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twinkle twinkle little star...
how i wonder what you are
someware above my abyss
shineing light in my unhappyness
above my shattered world so high
like a dimond in the sky
guide me through my frears
be the hope that stops my tears
twinkle twinkle little star...
when my light is gone so far
your my one to shine so bright
and lead me through this pich black night
As i travele in the dark
i thank you for your tiny spark;
for i could not see which way to go,
If you did not twinkle so.
twinkle twinkle little star
how i wonder what you are...
up above the world so high
my guardian angel in the sky
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Re: my little star
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:04:32 AM AEST
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| hey, good job! i like it. |
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Re: my little star
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by AliB on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:35:51 AM AEST
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That was really good! Flowed well, I've got the tune in my head now, lmao.
Ali xx |
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Re: my little star
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by Catalina on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:39:27 AM AEST
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Wow, I enjoyed this write. I love the perception of it all.
~Catalina~ |
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Re: my little star
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:05:32 AM AEST
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| great |
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Re: my little star
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by o0meg0o on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:43:47 AM AEST
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| i loved your poem...it's really creative and flows well..dont stop writing because you're very talented! |
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