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I Died By Your Hands
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:09:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Please just take the blade
And shove in a little bit more
I haven’t lost enough blood yet
It hasn’t even hit the floor
The pain is now unbearable
But please don’t let that stop you
I’m so close to death
And you know that it is true
So you push a little bit harder
Twist it around to make it really hurt
Then leave me there covered in blood
Lying face down in the dirt
I hope you’re happy now
Because I died by your hands
Your cold heart killed me
You couldn’t possibly understand
Just forget who I am
It’s not like I matter
I was completely heart broken
But no one heard my heart shatter
No one cared enough
To see if I was alright
You all just pointed and walked away
When you saw my dead body in your sight
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-11-28 01:09:24]
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Re: I Died By Your Hands
(User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:16:55 AM AEST
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| It's really good. I can like...hear/see your pain. Nice write. If you ever wanna talk tho,I'm here. |
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Re: I Died By Your Hands
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by veenu on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:35:29 AM AEST
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| oh................ why u write that my shattered heart again weeped .......................plz....................................................................i just want to say stop playing games with hearyts |
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Re: I Died By Your Hands
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:31:27 AM AEST
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| i really liked this,i could feel the unbearable pain.very deep,great write |
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