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Stitches For A Mouth
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:02:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She is just
A floating doll.
With stitches for a mouth.
Dark bags under her eyes.
Pale skin,
Wisps of hair
Bloody wrists.
This is not her.
She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.
She lays among
The perfect white clouds
Infecting them
Turning perfect white
To blood stained red.
She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.
Her voice is anothers
As it shouts for help
Screaming for a sanctuary
But the cries go unheard
The voice dies
Like she one day will.
She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.
Her hands are not hers
As they grasp
The perfect
Silver knife
To make
One
Last
Fatal
Cut.
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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2004-11-28 01:02:32]
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Re: Stitches For A Mouth
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:33:19 AM AEST
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very creepy. I liked this poem a bit as well as
the images of the clouds turning red.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Stitches For A Mouth
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by veenu on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:40:55 AM AEST
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| good write the cries go unheard..................... |
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Re: Stitches For A Mouth
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by Jodwin on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:28:50 AM AEST
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I like the word play in this one, though the cutting oneself isn't just my stuff for a poem...
A good write nevertheless. |
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Re: Stitches For A Mouth
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:52:23 AM AEST
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| Great write. her voice is anothers as it shouts for help... this was my favorite part. |
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Re: Stitches For A Mouth
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by Strawberry_Stitch on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:57:51 AM AEST
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sounds like me you were describing
I love it. Im obsessed with stitches ( nick name) and death dolls.
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Re: Stitches For A Mouth
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by evilcherry312 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:54:23 AM AEST
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| i think most people who write on the "darker side" identify with this, as do i. good job, very moving for me. |
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