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My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:17:24 AM in AEST
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My words take form and take life they chose to do as they like
To come together to steal your heart
And put you back together when you feel torn apart
You are sweet and kind and you should never hurt
You should be protected with no girth
You are an angel but can’t see your wings
But your feathers cover all of me
I see your faith it’s in your eyes
You are as beautiful as you are wise
Your beauty could never spoil
It is too pure and true and very sweet
A beauty rich in everything
The stars dust and the moons light
You are what gives beauty to the night
My words pour out from my mouth trickle down
To paper and take form as if they had a life of their own
And all they want to do is steal your heart all they want it you
To them you are so amazing and because of you they live
To them you are a work of art that only god could give
My words spill out from my mouth
They trickle down and stain this paper
Bringing life to a white desolate surface
Wanting to be read by you with one purpose
To steal your heart away as you do mine
To reach you through space and time
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Re: My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:33:29 AM AEST
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This was so uplifting. Beautifully romantic. I enjoyed this immensely. Keep up the good work.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:18:36 AM AEST
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An awesome masterpeice of truths.
good job.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
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by veenu on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:51:45 AM AEST
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thats offcourse a great and true write everyone lovbe the truth..................d o a pleasure keep writing
something for u from my poem the words.......
if there would be no words,
there would no love,
there would nothing to fight for and no sound to carry on,
so make them to flow make them to glow...
by ur composing and so on.........
these words never die they will go all along..........
naveen |
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Re: My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:07:21 AM AEST
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Sweetie this is amazing.
Everything just so true about it.
This poem had your writers flaire in it.
I await your next masterpiece..............
take care babe
Love
Stace xxxxx |
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Re: My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
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by pixie on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:17:26 AM AEST
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awww John that was delightful to read, lovely,
pixie xx |
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Re: My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:39:57 AM AEST
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| beauty.. |
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Re: My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:29:19 PM AEST
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| you were right. i liked it. the second time even =] |
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Re: My Words Give Live When They Stain The paper
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:11:51 PM AEST
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| How magical! |
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