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Our Goodbye
Contributed by
damentedsuicide
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Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:11:13 PM in AEST
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My head pounding
With the words you said
Another man has left me for dead
I tried to make you smile
Lied and hid the happieness i thought we had
You told me you loved me
And all you needed was me
Now you tell
The we can be no longer
You say that if it is ment to be
We will see all in the end
So for now i cut to rid me of your memory
The only thing i held on to in this life
I dont want you to think
You are the reason of my suicide
It was always there
Just pushed to the side
Only wondering if someone cared
But your interst fadded in me
Our long good bye
Just brought tears to my eyes
You didnt realize how much you ment to me
~~~To Tommy~~~~
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Re: Our Goodbye
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:40:28 PM AEST
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| that was an amazing, heartrenching, emotional, and powerful write. it was written extremely well. you can die for something/someone, but dont die because of something/someone... |
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Re: Our Goodbye
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by Jodwin on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:52:32 AM AEST
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| I like. A good write. |
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