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Sudden Bliss
Contributed by
flash_16
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Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:23:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What is this I'm feeling?
My thoughts are now blurred and the way I am acting is ubsurd.
It's been two years since I've loved,is it time I gave it up?
I wish I knew what to do.
I feel so good being with you.
How can something so wrong feel so right?
I'm done putting up a fight.
We're always together by the end of the night.
Sitting in your Jeep,I feel so complete.
Losing control of my heart and soul.
Do you feel the same? Or is it only a game?
I pray things will never change.
The way you laugh, the way you touch,
I can't get enough.
It's beginning to make since,we are given a second chance.
Then you step out and ask me to dance.
There's no better way to describe romance.
We begin to kiss, and it is sudden BLISS.
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Re: Sudden Bliss
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by subchild on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:58:58 PM AEST
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| Jesus for a Girl you have no depth do you..Put us all to shame..Rather then bliss this should have been called................. |
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Re: Sudden Bliss
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by taryn on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:28:44 PM AEST
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| very sweet.....wilbur come home! |
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