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harder
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:56:37 PM in AEST
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It's getting harder and harder to face another day...
I lie in bed and pretend im someone else,
Equipt with all the things that would make me complete...
When I close my eyes to sleep,
No one sees I'm suffering.
When I close my eyes and scream...
When I take this gun and my life...
You'll soon see how hard it is to be me.
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2004-11-27 21:56:37]
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Re: harder
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by EternalNight4x on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:01:59 PM AEST
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| short and to the point...well expressed, I can relate to this poem soemtimes it seems that no one knows how it feels to be you..well keep posting |
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Re: harder
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:05:55 PM AEST
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| wow, i love it!!! |
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Re: harder
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by kailadragon on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:40:59 PM AEST
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| this poem is wonderful.....i love the raw emotion and i can identify exactly with how you feel....please check out some of mine sometime, keep'em comin |
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Re: harder
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:12:01 PM AEST
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| excellent write. powerful and emotional. it might be hard to keep going on, but at least you are going on... |
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