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What Could Be
Contributed by
Joker17
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Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
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"What Could Be” - by J. Samuelson 01/19/2001
Perplexed by all of this mystery
Frightened by things still unknown
Lying to me and my inner self
False hopes and darkened skies are threatening
Left helpless to wander aimlessly
Amidst a raging depth of What Could Be
Locked into a world of affliction
Chained to walls of circumstance
Frozen time and space suspend me
I’m indebted to accept this destiny
Unable to escape the confusion within
Condition unstable, critically aware
Indignation controlling questioned elation
Apprehension rules over my innocence
The downcast prayers for What Could Be
Defy the desire of that which should be.
Yet unwilling to yield to the forces surrounding
Savagely defending my reason and want
Eternally yearning to battle for my will
Optimistic, and craving What Could Be.
Copyright ©
Joker17
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2002-11-23 16:00:00]
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Re: What Could Be
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by Daniel_Brabble on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 04:11:07 PM AEST
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Very nice allegorical imagry here.
An excellant poem. Keep up the awesome work! |
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Re: What Could Be
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by Joker17 on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 08:34:06 PM AEST
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| Thanks for the feedback. I'm happy you enjoyed this poem, hopefully as much as I did writing it. There is much more to come, in this rollercoaster called my "past" life. |
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Re: What Could Be
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:54:01 PM AEST
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| Really great write here,I liked the words you used! Christina |
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Re: What Could Be
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by OreO on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:29:12 PM AEST
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enjoy the miserable heartache that prompted this particular poem from my soul you say???? No i dont enjoy the miserable heartache that prompted this particular poem......i dont enjoy in anyone's heartache....i think you write beautifully and i think this poem has beautiful visions..i only can say i hope your pain is better and that you have overcome this dark place in your life.....my heart goes out to you....and your talent shines through your words...
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Re: What Could Be
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:42:09 PM AEST
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| Good poem, although I hope you don't really feel that way. everyone goes through those kinds of thoughts sometimes. |
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Re: What Could Be
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 06:56:12 PM AEST
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Wow... I am not sure what to say. This whole thing is just really good.. Keep this up. Great write...
Jodi |
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