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The Allure of Beautiful Sadness
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 02:45:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She is beautiful to me
With these kind eyes
Eyes that can only be compared to
An overcastting endless sky
Or an infinite aurora
Of grays, blues and greens
Pale eyes that all can see
But her beauty does not stop there
She has a sweet face with wanting lips
How precious would one of her kisses be?
Trapping someone in ecstasy for all eternity
Having felt the final bliss
And then death for a life would be complete
Then from her hands be reborn
With the warmth of her skin regain it all and hurt no more
She is not statuesque but better and for more alive
Far more angel like than any other can get to be
She has this sadness to her that just add to her allure
And her faith resonates from her
I can see her wings wrap around the earth
Hers is a beautiful destiny that’s the stars have shown me
She also has this brilliance about her
This warmth in an artist’s way
She is all these things to me and more
Even more than what she knows
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Re: The Allure of Beautiful Sadness
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by Angelluv2write on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 02:58:20 PM AEST
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| Wow amazing! Very profound! I hope you continue to post ur writing, its really great! And thank you for ur lovely comment on my poem as well. Angel |
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Re: The Allure of Beautiful Sadness
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 03:29:40 PM AEST
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Thank you for such a wonderful poem...
This is just so briiliant and every time i read it i wanna cry with so much joy.
It really made me feel good about myself.
You are such a talented writer..........
God bless you.
Love
Stace xxx |
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Re: The Allure of Beautiful Sadness
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by Kie on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:18:31 PM AEST
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I am impressed and touched in the heart with your poem of friendship.
It just says so much about your character. I think this is an endearing and beautiful dedication.
Kie |
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Re: The Allure of Beautiful Sadness
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:32:57 PM AEST
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| I'm so glad to be reading your poetry..are you still reading mine a thousand times..lol??? this is beautiful. |
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Re: The Allure of Beautiful Sadness
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by pixie on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:40:53 AM AEST
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awww John this is what can I say ,,, lovely so sweet and caring, you have a good heart my friend
pixie xx |
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