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Gorgeous
Contributed by
Merry
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Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:07:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Fine workmanship
Bones from ancient tribes
Perfectly match green eyes
Peering from behind auburn veil
Gorgeous
She sucks in the word like oxygen
But she doesn’t believe it
Doesn’t feel it
Her soul hungers
Somewhere out of sight
Never nourished by accomplishments
Never enough of anything
She tries again and again
Hoping to ignite the spark
Cold flint of heart unwilling to light
Her inner darkness
Fingers trace the bones
She knows what she looks like
But cannot see herself
Gorgeous
She sucks in the word like oxygen
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-11-27 10:07:48]
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Re: Gorgeous
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 02:02:50 PM AEST
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This is just so well put merry, excellent word usage.
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Re: Gorgeous
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by Kie on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:15:02 PM AEST
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Do you ever read a poem and go WOW? Well thats what I did, when reading this and that is all I will say.
A very wise and insightful person you are.
You have mastered words...
Kie |
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Re: Gorgeous
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 05:31:41 PM AEST
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But Gaille...you ARE gorgeous...inside and out, and you should be reminded of that everyday. Toss in the fact that you are talented beyond words........
Roses for my daisy
Larry |
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