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Unexpected
Contributed by
Smooth
on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Passion fire once befell from your soul to mine,
I patiently await the clock to turn it's hands in time,
I find myself addicted to the warmth within your voice,
I'm so in love my heart is full, to make an easy choice.
Some want to believe it must be difficult to await an angels touch,
for me the answer is easy, for me it's not too much,
to ask my heart to wait for her, to ask it to be still,
to seek her touch by heavens clock to know that it is real.
Love is always worth it.
Smooth
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Smooth
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2002-11-23 14:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unexpected
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniel_Brabble on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 04:13:58 PM AEST (User
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Amen! Love truly is worth it. And the way you described the scenario does the emotions justice. Thanks for the great read. |
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Re: Unexpected
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 04:33:06 AM AEST (User
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this is so beautifully written, i really
enjoyed this one alot, Thanks for sharing
this one,
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Unexpected
(User Rating: 1 ) by Smooth on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 03:37:10 PM AEST (User
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Thank you for your comments, very sweet of you and I look forward to reading you as well.
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Re: Unexpected
(User Rating: 1 ) by Smooth on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 03:39:43 PM AEST (User
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Thank You, I was trying to capture that paticular emotion when discovery is at hand. |
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Re: Unexpected
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 12:22:16 AM AEST (User
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Great Poem :*) |
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