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without you
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:48:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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time spent alone,
so sad and blue.
heart broken and lonely,
without you.
i stand alone,
no one to care.
lonely and loveless
which isnt fair.
i'll stand my grounds,
untill the day,
when im not alone ,
in any way
im here to say,
these words are true.
im lost and lonely
without you
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freda_burrel
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2004-11-26 23:48:41]
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Re: without you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:50:32 PM AEST
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| patience is important. it will save you a lot of broken hearts if you just wait for that special one to come to you too. good luck. |
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Re: without you
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:20:18 AM AEST
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Sad yet luvly writing.
luv, huggs, faith,
emy |
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Re: without you
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 02:11:48 AM AEST
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This is a lovely write, very sad yet romantic at the same time.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: without you
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:21:24 AM AEST
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| excellent write! missing someone is heartbreaking...i can relate. great job! |
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