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Contributed by Niccy on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:53:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I truely thought you might possibly like me,
But to be fooled is what it turned out to be,

My sister went into her room and left the computer on,
She didn't care that I was reading what ya'll said while she was gone,

You saw me on the webcam and asked if I was reading it,
But what I saw was something I wasn't expecting I'll admit,

What I saw was something I wasn't waiting for,
After I saw that I went in my room and shut the door,

I started crying and couldn't stop,
I felt like I was going to drop,

I really really really like you a lot,
My sister came in my room and I got caught,

She kept asking me what was wrong,
But I couldn't tell her, she tried so long,

I made you feel bad,
And that made me more sad,

I never want to hurt you,
But I did, and that's something I can't undo,

I really really want you to like me too,
But I feel like I'm trying to force you,

If you don't like me like that please tell,
And don't worry, it'll work out well,

I beg you with all my heart please answer yes or no,
Please please please don't say I don't know,

I know this is hard for you,
Because you don't want me to get hurt do you?,

I rather have you tell me the truth than lie,
Because when people lie to me it makes me want to cry,

I better end this poem somehow,
And now you know how much I still like you now.

Copyright © Niccy ... [ 2004-11-26 22:53:57]
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Re: Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 02:02:58 AM AEST
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hmm.. i dont know what to really say, but your peom was good, i like the rhymes in it. You should keep writing!!!

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