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Unspoken Desire
Contributed by
Catalina
on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:35:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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You say that you care,
But I need you to show me…
I know that your there,
But I need you to hold me…
You say that you are listening…
Do you really understand?
I know you are my lover…
Can you be my friend?
I know that you can see me,
But do you know who I am?
I need you to work with me…
So are you able to bend?
I have been show destiny’s road…
Through all of this will I walk it alone?
I am here for love,
Make your reasons known…
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Catalina
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2004-11-26 19:35:33]
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Re: Unspoken Desire
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 08:23:02 PM AEST
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| I LOVE this poem! i know what you are meaning! Its so short and sweet and to the point! nice write! |
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Re: Unspoken Desire
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:36:00 PM AEST
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A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Unspoken Desire
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by pixie on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:13:06 AM AEST
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very good write,
pixie xx |
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